I liked your idea and some parts were quite humorous (like the mum and coffee) but you gotta work on your animation and timing. The worst part about it was that it was very slow. Make sure the next episode doesn't have shots that last a very long time when nothing is happening. For instance when he presses the alarm clock button, it could happen within 5 frames or not even be there at all but instead it took a long time.
Either way I like the way you are taking this, the concept is simple but fun.
Thanks FuelKat. I agree that it was kinda slow, but I need to get the balance right between quick and fast. I'm glad you liked the mother and coffee bit. That was my more, umm.. productive moments.
Thanks for the review. =]
Why is Newgrounds supporting StickPage?
This animation was not front page material. It wasn't bad, but it had no style what so ever. The only good part was by Master Samus (oh look, Crazy Jay isn't using his own material to get popular, what a surprise!).
It seems that NG only put this on front page because its crazy jay, not because its good. I'm surprised that NG, the place where all artists are treated equally and with respect, are giving stickpage publicity, who are just as bad as Ebaum's World.
Good Job Ratfaceeee, its almost perfect; the only thing missing is a big robot dinosaur! I hope this animation wins some awards or gets on front page, it rox. The sound for the explosion at the end is particularly good ;)
It looks like it could be a good movie.
But I think its too short and pointless to be submitted to NewGrounds.
That was funny, especially all that mangled up ending, and the Matrix Reloaded bit.
I found parts of it quite funny, its a shame it wasn't longer. Your drawings are quite good, but could improve.
It was pretty cool, I liked most of it, and the music was quite good except for the Nickleback song. The one thing that annoyed me howerver was the titles for every seen; we don't need to be told that he is on the rooftops, or in a ransacked building etc.
That Was so fucking boring
What the fuck man that sucked harsh the art aint to bad, at least u traced a fuck load of bitmats, nd the fucking angel guy? what the fuck is going on there he looks like the guy out of the movie the Iron Giant? and who can be bothered to listen to some fucking keyboard and read, the only thing it looked like you could animate was 3D. BOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRIIIIIIINGGGGG
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