Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: London, UK
Job: Web Designer
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I liked your idea and some parts were quite humorous (like the mum and coffee) but you gotta work on your animation and timing. The worst part about it was that it was very slow. Make sure the next episode doesn't have shots that last a very long time when nothing is happening. For instance when he presses the alarm clock button, it could happen within 5 frames or not even be there at all but instead it took a long time.
Either way I like the way you are taking this, the concept is simple but fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks FuelKat. I agree that it was kinda slow, but I need to get the balance right between quick and fast. I'm glad you liked the mother and coffee bit. That was my more, umm.. productive moments.
Thanks for the review. =]
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It was pretty cool, I liked most of it, and the music was quite good except for the Nickleback song. The one thing that annoyed me howerver was the titles for every seen; we don't need to be told that he is on the rooftops, or in a ransacked building etc.
Author's Response:
Ok
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